Breaking even - draft 2

This is draft 2 of my trailer. I have changed the opening and closing credits, and cut out some of the clips, such as the watch. I have also cut down alot of the clips, such as the karate clip that I was and still am debating cutting out completely. To finalise my trailer I am going to get some target audience feedback, to help me make my final decisions. I still wish to add in some more transitions, and I think that the lighting need editing on some of the clips, for example, on the clip of the group in the pub. I feel the lighting is too dim there which can connote negative things about the group, which is not what I intended. Therefore I may make it brighter to connote in a more positive light. (pardon the pun!)